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It's a trickling, difficult to channel,
Lapping at
The canals between brain tissues, teasing,
Nipping, flitting and
Paranoid like a hummingbird.

Either I am still and it sidles
Between my bones and runs
Down me and into the ground,

Or I grasp it
And break it, smallish bones crushed
Between poised fingers and a pen,
The blood trickling down,
Difficult to channel and flitting,
Becomes red poem upon my page.
:iconsasukesadork:
:iconlive-love-write:
prompt: with the pen in hand
:iconrawem0tion:
prompt: creation
:iconword-wit:
prompt: bones

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:iconmandi7mm:
*Mandi7MM Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing poem! :D
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~Sasukesadork Aug 10, 2011  Student Writer
thank you (:
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*Mandi7MM Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Your welcome :D
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:iconlah-tee-dah:
*flails* I love this! It's so nervous and energized and perfect feeling!
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~Sasukesadork Jul 30, 2011  Student Writer
thank you (:
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~Tubesock427 Jul 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
.. This is awesome. The first line on the thumb drew me in, and you can just feel it! :dummy:
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~Sasukesadork Jul 29, 2011  Student Writer
thumb? o.o
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~Tubesock427 Jul 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thumbnail thingy XD
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~Sasukesadork Jul 30, 2011  Student Writer
oh xD
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