literature

what gods are watching?

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Literature Text

From their perch a-way up high,
They watch hallelujah birth
and gospel truths and churches sound
cross cracked and barren earth,

And listening and appreciative
They are of all these praise
They wonder bout our preservation
And gamble number and days

Till we, at last! fade away
From our neglected ground
In good faith of heaven above
Without ever looking down

Sunsets cut like splinters
Tween the clouds that gather again
Where the gods that should be way up high
Descend to earth as rain
hahahahahaha, what's a rhyme scheme 8D
:iconclub-lit:
prompt: hallelujah
:iconbolditalicunderline:
prompt: splinter
:iconwriteuponastar:
prompt: sinning
:iconwordflight:
prompt: playing god
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Kasarix's avatar
Hello~

Very nice poem, here!
Each line has a lot of impact and your message is really strong!
I think you've written this in a very fitting format!
And, wow, you've entered in a lot of contests! XD

I'm from #wordflight.
We are currently judging for this contest, thank you for entering!
:D